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Offline ajlaird

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Re: Poetry
« Reply #15 on: March 27, 2010, 11:03:58 PM »
I think you left out an 'a' in the second line. And added in an extra 'the' in fourth.

By the way, I don't really care, just thought I would stir you guys up a bit.
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